"This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It's like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length, I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes, when I am certain the reader is rested, I will engage them with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums. The crash of the cymbals - sounds that say listen to this, it is important."
I saw the desert. It was immense. Silent, there, and nothing else. and it was real. Only there where the sun becomes alive and part of you. Always blazing, staring, alive. Eating your skin. Feeding on your psyche.
Try it. step into the desert. just One step. Only One.
"This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It's like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length, I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes, when I am certain the reader is rested, I will engage them with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo,
"But I'm breathing so I guess I'm still alive
even if signs seem to tell me otherwise"
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Lynch and Trent... damn haunting
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1RN6pT3zL44
I saw the desert. It was immense. Silent, there, and nothing else. and it was real.
Only there where the sun becomes alive and part of you.
Always blazing, staring, alive. Eating your skin. Feeding on your psyche.
Try it. step into the desert.
just One step.
Only One.
Only
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lw7LwGQBjcc&feature=plcp
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Hope you find this interesting. ill upload the movie when i'll find time.
I miss being here
:blackrose: