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Beneath the fearsome sky by =ViviPhalloids:iconViviPhalloids:



“A scream of silence we crave
A storm to blow the dust, For the dead to rest
…and spare our grave”

Everlasting wars,
Blew rage as an offspring
Our candles drained
One strike, in one frame…
From a mist to a fog
The one-eyed seeing man is king
The song of blood and gore,
Splinters and debris
The bombs had to sing.
Shattered hope, love and dreams
You drew the world in your stream
Red and flowing, sordid river
A soldier sailed you on a dead beaten child

Agony engraved,
Forevermore the scars
Like a metal sliver lost in our hearts

Neverending sting
As the scenes repeats
Like the music of flies, and the taste of rust

I have no more to tell you
This was never a tale
But I have witnessed the Beast
And I have lost my faith

Fearless we must stand, demand at least
Freedom within, procreate the peace
To focus on our soul, forget to wonder
In a new bliss of ours…
…in dreamless slumber.
©2006-2009 =ViviPhalloids
:iconviviphalloids:

Author's Comments

inspired by the war and specialllyyy by the sounds of planes i usually hear in the silent nights.
A friend once said that if we could all just live in a meditating state (wich is impossible) there wouldnt be any chaos. peace within, sand silence outside.

i started it as if its the end, but its not how i wanted to end... its like "if u wan tto kill us do it, but at least spare our graves :angered:"
and let the goddamn dead R.I.P !!!!!
im really glad with this piece. i had so many thoughts while writting that i lost most of them. i hate that :(

enjoy :)

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:iconelle-est-mental:
It's beautiful, and in light of everything we're living through today, very apt. Thanks for sharing, it's passionate and eloquent. Good work, friend...

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With every passing hour our solar system comes forty-three thousand miles closer to globular cluster 13 in the constellation Hercules, and still there are some misfits who continue to insist that there is no such thing as progress. -- Ransom K. Ferm
:iconviviphalloids:
dunt thank me ! thank you for this beautiful comment :blowkiss:
i apreciate that :)

--
Create your pain, design your wound
watch the fresh blood drain
from your skin and from your vains.
This art can take you far
once it becomes a scar.
The agony you endured
and the beauty of this scar,
will make you a star...
:iconelle-est-mental:
My pleasure, I assure you. We need all the passion and goodwill we can get. Keep it up, you have at least one eager, "mental" reader :)

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With every passing hour our solar system comes forty-three thousand miles closer to globular cluster 13 in the constellation Hercules, and still there are some misfits who continue to insist that there is no such thing as progress. -- Ransom K. Ferm
:iconviviphalloids:
:smooch: tu est mental :D :hug:

--
Create your pain, design your wound
watch the fresh blood drain
from your skin and from your vains.
This art can take you far
once it becomes a scar.
The agony you endured
and the beauty of this scar,
will make you a star...
:iconbeyrout:
i loved ur end
nice job and exelent maneuvre of verses

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and i will smile, and laugh and choke
:iconblack0roze:
oh very nicely written my dear
honest i enjoyed reading it

--
Grant A Rose For The Dead
:iconcorpsebride00:
"The one-eyed seeing man is king"

"Fearless we must stand, demand at least
Freedom within, procreate the peace
To focus on our soul, forget to wonder
In a new bliss of ours…
…in dreamless slumber"

ok 1 word: AMAZING!!!

i loved this!! so much!! :clap:

--
Can A Heart Break After It Stops Beating?

~corpsebride00 :heart: ~sergiofx
:iconjazzamolia:
this is so great.
and i agree with beyrut about the ending, it's fascinating..
Real Excellent work.
:iconviviphalloids:
thank u my friend. i love ur comments :)

--
Create your pain, design your wound
watch the fresh blood drain
from your skin and from your vains.
This art can take you far
once it becomes a scar.
The agony you endured
and the beauty of this scar,
will make you a star...

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